My book is about 6 girls all with different powers, they live in a world of angels and demons werewolves and vampires.The girls know they are different front. They live in a orphanage in the Bronx but only 5 of the girls they find the 6 at school. She was always there but they never notice until P.E. when they saw her birthmark on her thigh which look like a tattoo dragon which all them have on them some where. There names are Isis(black), Tori(white), Alex(Hispanic), Sam(White), Aliyah(White), Naomi(Hispanic) they all have a sort of a gothic look. Isis is the leader, she calls them her pack, light brown skin black brown hair, her eyes are usually dark brown but constantly changes color as her mood changes, Tori is the right hand man for Isis, she is a hot head with jet black hair, her voice is like Raven of of Teen Titans, Alex is a tomboy who love electronics and wrestling she is tough and insults and punches you quicker than you can say “nice tattoo” which she hates cuz she stress that it’s a birthmark, Sam is red hair green eyes, she is a smarty, and loves plants, but will punch you if think she’s just another pretty face, Aliyah blonde hair and blue eyed, she is mischevious, loud and sarcastic, she is the fun, but will kill if anyone messes with her pack and that leaves Naomi who is the quiet little mouse, she is scared of her powers, and is always picked on, but if you press the right buttons she can be a fighting machine who would mutilate anyone who messes with her and her pack. The girls are a new breed half angel and demon they are the most powerful of both halves they were found by a unknown source, the girls only know that they’ve been in a orphange as long as the were born and they were never given a family they are the only ones left at the orphange no one really want a group of 15 year olds. Naomi was taken end by a women but husband is a drunk and pervert. The pack takes her away from him. They end up being takening away one night as they are walking and use there powers to beat up some gang members by some bad cops and put on this black market like underground fighting place were vampires make other creature fight each other for money. After they arrive they are forced to fight, a member from a secret organization for young mixed breeds of werewolves vampires and angels and demons sees Isis fight and then sees her birhtmark. His name is Eric and buys them out Isis is very suspecious of him but goes along they meet a lady named Mira who holds they secrets of there past and destiny.
The Mark of Six
The Mark We Share.
Angels, Demons, Werewolves, and Vampires! Oh my!
The Pack’s Destiny.
The Pack.
1). Amazing Creation Of God
2). Spiritual Power
I like the summary and a good title wood b power pack
Kiss by a dragon
Kiss of a dragon
The Six
Backwards from six
Angel weep
Sounds really interesting, would love to know when it is published!
I thought maybe one of the following would be pretty cool!
-Miscellaneous
Definition:
1. Consisting of members or elements of different kinds; of mixed character.
2. Having various qualities, aspects, or subjects.
(That could apply to them all having different powers)
-Serendipity
Definition:
1. When someone finds something that they weren’t expecting to find.
(That could apply to the girls finding their powers)
I hope you have no problems finding a title and publishing your book!!
I’m 14 and I love fantasy novels, I would personally be attracted to a title like the above 🙂
How do I like the summary? Some of the sentences don’t make any sense, and others are run-on. The grammar and spelling is atrocious. It’s hard to figure out what this book is about, because this is more of an introduction than a summary.It tells about the personalities of the characters, with just a few sentences towards the end telling a little bit about what they’ll actually do. It seems to be a work in progress, and I hope you plan on doing lots and lots of work on this before it is finalized.
As for the title, how about “Six-Pack”?
I really hate to give you such a boring title after you gave a long (and intriguing) summary, but if you ask me, “The 6” or “The Pack” sounds like it would be fitting.