I’m a savaged half-witted oxy verbal genius, did you morons get it?”
A dull damaged dolt that’s so thick skulled, hurtful I suppose when I’m finished”
Slash an walking abyss”
Infact an untold imbecilic, A stupid prick that outta-be witless”
An grievous-stiffness”
I sit pissed-fists uplifted tightly gripped to crisis and to this sh*t mixed with life’s finances”
Aching pain enhanced and anguished emotions that I’m sent in with throwing continuous missed-fits”
At this burned bit*h of a life”
Ripping brunt bridges again in”
Through”
Blank pages, and hear him brain storming mourning in steepness”
I’m alone and weakened”
Feelings speaking, leaving the most outspoken grieving spirit so speechless”
Ire Lyrics-shrieking, hear it?
Blaring Like a sharpened piecing cry just high pitched it”
I’m the darkened eyes of my lightest ambition”
Fixing my tearing sight on my broken niches”
I got his handprints, at the ends of my fingertips, and damn yeah I can reach it”
A fleet ship of steering dreams, I stare-em down to see it”
Below the cliff leading to rock bottom, easing problems I got em hitting its bottom dollar”
Scheming in my back pockets are my empty wallets, packed with silver and copper”
Compared to the usual **** on here, this is awesome. I’d give it a 9/10.
I don’t really listen to rap but it eems like a good enough song
Scheming in my back pockets are my empty wallets, packed with silver and copper
How can your wallets both be empty if they are both packed with silver and copper..
Ripping brunt bridges again in. What does brunt mean?
What style is it supposed to be sung in? I don’t really get them to be honest.
Pretty damn good, you’re definitely ready to write, now you just need to lay them down on a track and get them out there.
It was decent, I’d give it a 6/10