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Alright, in a nutshell, I’m jealous of my younger brother. Let me give you guys some background. First, I’m 26, he’s 22.
I graduated from University last November and I’ve been unemployed since January (I lost my job…I hated it and was about to quit, but still, it sucks to get fired). I’ve been looking for work for the past few months and haven’t had much luck. I think the main problem is I have little to no interest in my field (Commerce) so it’s hard to be motivated and driven. I’m really at a spot in my life where I have no idea what I want to do. And to add to that, my luck in the romance department is no better. I’ve never had a serious girlfriend. I’ve had many dates but nothing ever flourished or took off.
Now onto my brother. He’s a neuroscience student and wants to be a neurologist or neuroscientist. He has very good grades and has a much more vivacious life than I do. He goes out more, he volunteers, he makes good use of his time. He used to be in the same spot as I am but now he’s doing a lot better than I ever did. He found his passion and niche…something I’ve been wanting for a while now…
Anyway, he recently started dating a girl. After the second date, he told me he made out with her and I remember a sharp pain in my chest. I was bleeding with jealousy. I didn’t want to rain on his parade so I made it seem like I was happy for him…but really, I’m totally not. I’m secretly hoping it doesn’t work out between them. In my mind, he should go through all the failed attempts I experienced before having a successful relationship…he doesn’t have much dating or sexual experience so I guess I feel it’s not fair that it works out for him right away…I know all of this sounds grossly pathetic and I’m honestly ashamed of having such thoughts…but they are my thoughts and they are how I feel, I have to acknowledge it…
I guess my question isn’t ‘is this pathetic?’ because I know it is…but how can I change so that I don’t feel this way? I WANT to be happy for him. I don’t want to be the jealous older brother…

This is the last part of a write-up I am supposed to give for getting a job. I have tried to make it as entertaining as possible. What do you think (on reading it casually) ? Would you hire me ? Can it be improved ?
In March 2011, I reached the US for clinical experience. I was amazed at the rapidity with which the findings of the latest research are incorporated into routine patient care. Even more amazing is the fact that every patient regardless of economic or social status receives the same very high level of care. My observerships at the Georgetown University Hospital, Uversity of Iowa and The Smell and Taste Treatment and Research institute not only improved me as a physician, They also introduced me to different varieties of hospitals within the United States which would help me better understand my niche while doing residency.
My long term plan after residency is to complete fellowship training in vascular neurology and be a professor and indulge in research/teaching. However, my first and foremost priority in the next few years is to make myself a reliable, proficient and professional physician during residency.
A neurologist in the modern age faces a number of challenges. First, the amount of information is increasing every day. A physician must enjoy the process of updating himself and should incorporate newly acquired ideas into his practice as soon as possible. Secondly, Neurology is a field in which patients often suffer from illnesses that are progressive, potentially incurable and often, inevitably fatal. A neurologist must have a strong sense of duty to not give up on such patients, but to persevere and give his best to every patient. Every physician regardless of specialty needs these qualities in some measure, but to a neurologist – They are vital!
My passion for clinical soundness and professionalism is my greatest strength. I enjoy ‘teaching myself’ and transmit my enthusiasm for learning to those around me. Given a chance at your prestigious residency program, I am sure that I would add to positivity, responsibility and productivity to the team efforts and make an ethical and good resident.