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Sorry about any spelling mistakes as I am rushing.
Okay, over the past few months I have asked for your opinions on this book and I promise I will credit the YA community for your feedback. I have completed and I am editing parts of the book and extending parts I need. All I want is your final opinions and anything that would make you more interested.
My book is based in the year 2016 and is about an American/English military unit nicknamed Ironsights. Their job is to use stealth and tactic to take down the enemy using top noch and secret gear such as a Distorter, which distorts your image and makes you invisable to the eye as long as you stand still. They take down high value terrorist leaders and take down black markets and drug dealings faster and more effectively than any known force. In this book, they start a case following a mass distribution of firearms and weapon amunition. It quickly turns out that this isn’t the only case and that all over the world, black markets are spreading weapons across the globe for an unknown reason. The Ironsights job is to find out what is going on and how all the terrorist cells and organisations are linked. And, most importantly, take down its leader. This takes them on several missions, from capturing an oil refinory to capturing a target in the middle of a city during rush hour. They must progress quickly as hundreds of countries start pointing fingers at each other.
This is built on realitism and contains some violent scenes. It is about action, stealth and every character will have plenty of adaption. I have taken my time and made it smooth.
I welcome your opinion as you are the people who might read this some day. Thank you for all your help.

Sorry about any spelling mistakes as I am rushing.
Okay, over the past few months I have asked for your opinions on this book and I promise I will credit the YA community for your feedback. I have completed and I am editing parts of the book and extending parts I need. All I want is your final opinions and anything that would make you more interested.
My book is based in the year 2016 and is about an American/English military unit nicknamed Ironsights. Their job is to use stealth and tactic to take down the enemy using top noch and secret gear such as a Distorter, which distorts your image and makes you invisable to the eye as long as you stand still. They take down high value terrorist leaders and take down black markets and drug dealings faster and more effectively than any known force. In this book, they start a case following a mass distribution of firearms and weapon amunition. It quickly turns out that this isn’t the only case and that all over the world, black markets are spreading weapons across the globe for an unknown reason. The Ironsights job is to find out what is going on and how all the terrorist cells and organisations are linked. And, most importantly, take down its leader. This takes them on several missions, from capturing an oil refinory to capturing a target in the middle of a city during rush hour. They must progress quickly as hundreds of countries start pointing fingers at each other.
This is built on realitism and contains some violent scenes. It is about action, stealth and every character will have plenty of adaption. I have taken my time and made it smooth.
I welcome your opinion as you are the people who might read this some day. Thank you for all your help.

Not many people I can say have handled this well. From what info I have I have come up with a few decent people who have handled this situation better than others:
*Barack Obama(focused solely on the victims all weekend and didn’t politicize it)
*John Boehner(gave a nice speech Sunday morning also focusing only on the victims and nothing more)
*Elliot Spitzer(I never thought I would congratulate this guy for anything but he reported it fairly on his show last night) who pointed out on his show that the man’s favorite books ranged from Karl Marx’s Communist Manifesto to Mein Kampf making it more difficult to actually affiliate him with a party
*Stephanie Condon, a journalist for CBS News, who reported the man was a registered independent and also didn’t polarize the situation( http://www.cbsnews.com/8301-503544_162-2… )
*CNN in general for reporting this as fairly as they could and not just Eliot Spitzer(http://politicalticker.blogs.cnn.com/201…
* Greg Gutfeld & Bill Schultz & Andy Levy for not pointing fingers and also reporting it fairly(and Gutfeld added on to the books Spitzer listed by adding an Ayn Rand book which really makes this confusing) and saying that the man’s attacks were not politically motivated from what info he has
I have seen a lot of disgusting rhetoric from both sides trying to capitalize on this tragedy. Now, I am not saying the people I listed have not done this, in fact I could be wrong in my judgments and I know there are people I am missing(hence why I asked this), but from what info I have I have drawn this conclusion and would like to add on to it.
Look what this guy posted on his myspace by the way:http://www.examiner.com/us-headlines-in-…
Anyways, who has handled this well?