Affiliate Marketing Secrets

I wrote:
After recording a YouTube math lesson for a friend without any thought to it, the video quickly exploded with over 3,000 views and eventually steered me towards the education field. From the video I received a lot of interactions and feedback from people all over the world. I would have never known how much need there was for an explanation on limits with the greatest integer. Messages after messages, before I even realized, I found myself passionate about teaching.
During my undergraduate years at ——- University I took various classes from chemistry, education, to mathematics while being undecided on my major. This turned out to be a positive situation after deciding on what grade level to teach. I realized that an elementary teacher can teach a wide array of subjects. The idea of teaching in a classroom setting reminds me of the YouTube experience where I would get many interactions and make use of being technologically savvy by integrating technology for students to make the class more exciting and involved.
Furthermore, as I took the profession of teaching seriously I took classes to enrich skills that would be useful for a teacher such as Web Designing in spring 2012. For the final project I created a template website suited for a class available at: http://———. Another class is Methods and Issues in Teaching Mathematics in the summer of 2011 with Professor ———. As a freshman I recalled taking another one of Professor ———-’s class and witnessed her incredible ability to use differentiated instructions to teach. I was eager to find her different approaches teaching math and learned a great deal and even developed my own niche. Overall, I was determined and was dedicated towards to becoming a good teacher by making the best of my undergraduate years.
Ultimately, I felt the Master’s Program at —— can complement and improve upon what I have learned prior as an undergraduate. But also to extend upon what I have gained from YouTube. As an aspiring teacher I hope the program allow me the opportunity to take the next step to fulfill my career goals of getting me certified as an elementary teacher and become an asset to society.
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Please point out recommendations and suggestions? Also if you found any grammar mistakes? I tried to be unique and catch their attention but I don’t really know how. I thought the Youtube was my best honest unique situation.

A pesticide that kills an insect by interfering with the production of proteins in the insect would most directly affect the activity of
(1) ribosomes
(2) minerals
(3) chloroplasts
(4) mitochondria
When two different bird species temporarily occupy the same niche, they would most likely
(1) change their nesting behaviors
(2) not affect one another
(3) interbreed to form a new species (4) compete with one another
Which group would most likely be represented in a food chain?
(1) biotic factors
(2) abiotic factors
(3) inorganic compounds
(4) finite resources
Which statement describes a similarity between all enzymes, antibodies, and hormones?
(1) Their chemical structure is critical to their ability to function.
(2) Their ability to replicate identical copies ensures continuation of the species.
(3) They work better at 100°C than 37°C.
(4) They are made by and carried by the blood
Thank you SO much.

A pesticide that kills an insect by interfering with the production of proteins in the insect would most directly affect the activity of
(1) ribosomes
(2) minerals
(3) chloroplasts
(4) mitochondria
When two different bird species temporarily occupy the same niche, they would most likely
(1) change their nesting behaviors
(2) not affect one another
(3) interbreed to form a new species (4) compete with one another
Which group would most likely be represented in a food chain?
(1) biotic factors
(2) abiotic factors
(3) inorganic compounds
(4) finite resources
Which statement describes a similarity between all enzymes, antibodies, and hormones?
(1) Their chemical structure is critical to their ability to function.
(2) Their ability to replicate identical copies ensures continuation of the species.
(3) They work better at 100°C than 37°C.
(4) They are made by and carried by the blood
Thanks : )

I am stuck, I can’t come up with a thesis statement for my research essay, it’s suppose to be about Victoria’s secret and their marketing, I can’t do anything else without having my thesis.
help mee~~
thankss

From the moment you walk down the halls on your first day, it begins. The pressure consumes you, swallows you. Immediately it’s all about making friends, fitting in, and finding your niche. Already cliché cliques are forming: the jocks, the snobs, the mathletes, the stoners, and the notorious couch potatoes. One must define his or herself or face being defined by others. We categorize ourselves into one of these and conform to what society expects. Fearful of rejection, we stay comfortably within these expectations and boundaries. It usually goes a little like this: if you are a member of Assiteens Charity League your freshman year you are deemed a goodie-two-shoes, if you start on the varsity soccer team your sophomore year you are thought of as a jock, if you still go to church every Sunday by junior year you are a bible banger, if you actually do homework senior year you are officially a nerd. If I have learned one thing in my 4 years, it is that by allowing yourself to be classified and limited to only one of these clichés you have killed your true self. Conformity only limits your potential, shadows your ability, and narrows your opportunities.
When I came to this realization, I allowed myself to broaden my interests, increase my confidence, and discover my true self. I have defied the pressure, the clichés, and the expectations of others. I am proud to be an athletic, spiritual, and philanthropic nerd.

Can you please read my personal statement and give me any feedback or edits if necessary.
I was going to pick this topic (“being different”) or traveling into the West Bank in Israel on vacation and being afraid at first because of all the tension, but rather realizing it was safe. From that trip, I am not afraid to try something new or step out of my comfort zone.
SO HERE IT IS:
As a child, I was what one could call different. A self-proclaimed eccentric, although my young vocabulary usually grasped for words such as ‘weirdo’, my abnormal tendencies surfaced in everything I did. While most prepubescent boys were outside playing tee-ball or cruising on the latest Razor scooter, I was inside, at my own will, completing an intricately designed puzzle or perhaps learning Morse code.
It’s not that I unskilled in these mainstream activities, although my seven year record with the local little league proves otherwise. I just rather (alternatively) took interest in more logical, stimulating pursuits.
I was never one for a simple game of Candy Land or Go Fish. Instead, I reveled in beating my wordsmith of a grandfather in a game of Scrabble or refreshing my Trivial Pursuit knowledge with any unfortunate soul willing enough to quiz me. And when common board games just weren’t satisfactory for my six year old mind, I often created my own games, laying out a series of playing cards, and somehow amusing myself until mother called bedtime.
Yet being different exceeded far beyond my time consumers. When everyone’s favorite color was blue, I wasn’t afraid to say that mine was purple or pink. And when everyone was lugging around Power Ranger lunch boxes, I sported the classic and refined Barney.
But I didn’t decide to be different just to be quarrelsome or a nonconformist. In fact, I didn’t decide at all. It was just my God-given nature. Even to this day I’d much rather sit down on a lawn chair with a compelling murder mystery than mindlessly flip through the pages of a teenybopper magazine or, dare I say it, Twilight.
Of course there were times when I wanted to give up my peculiarity. It seemed that as I was getting older, being different was becoming more of a burden than an admirable uniqueness. Coping with the emotional, unnecessary drama of my preteen years, I wanted to be a part of some clique – not just reside in my own, gawky niche generally overlooked by the middle school socialites. It didn’t take me long (however) to realize I was no prep, no punk, and definitely no jock, no matter how hard I tried. As much as I wanted a label, none fit.
Suddenly, describing myself as different was no longer a hateful characterization nor a showcase of my individuality. Being different was, well, just being Jeremy.
Coming to this realization led me to become, what I believe to be, the confident and candid young man that I am today. Not afraid to speak my most always opinionated mind, I can stand strong in saying ‘Yes, I am unique, odd, strange, peculiar, and different. And I couldn’t be prouder.’