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What Do You Guys Think Of My Rap Lyrics?

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No Responses to “What Do You Guys Think Of My Rap Lyrics?”

  1. matt wu says:

    umm, it would help if it didnt all look like one huge sentence but i read the first couple sentences and it sounds pretty good.

  2. _MusicFr says:

    i liked it, but i think u should have an over all theme to your rap…..but u do have good rhyming skills!

  3. newtonp0 says:

    tips:
    put them in lines. soo much easier for u and others to read.
    is this one verse? if a verse was ever this long, me and many others would turn off the song.
    last but not least: never, ever, ever, ever, EVER skimp lines to rhyme. rhymes will come naturally, while ur spitting things that make no sense. examples:
    A Shampoo Product Called, “Try Me If You Dare.”
    A Nice Diamond But Not A Bit Frightened.
    Got Em Having An Affair With Donald Trump’s Hair
    these are some examples, but i really could copy and paste the whole thing here. u got potential, just start making sense. with tons of practice, ull look back on this in a year, and think “wow, this is bad” haha lol i dont hate u, just wanna help u get better! good luck!

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  5. Court says:

    i honestly love these lyrics:) its funny but also very well written and has very good rhyming. i would love to hear an actual recording of this i think it would be so awesome!!!!
    hope this helps<3

  6. MOJOSOth says:

    1) PLEASE write each verse in a single line. It’s hard to read it and get the whole concept when it’s all in one big paragraph. Oh, and you really shouldn’t capitalize every word, lol.
    2) I feel as if your lyrics portray your concern about length and rhyme instead of cleverness and meaning. No offense or anything so please take my criticism as constructive criticism – but it just seems like the rhyming of the lyrics is forced as if you got few words that rhyme and slapped it all in one verse to make everything “work”.
    If you feel as if your lyrics need more work, I’d be concerned more about the whole meaning instead of rhyme rhyme rhyme if I were you.

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