Hi,
I am writing an essay and English is not my native language. Please, check my text for mistakes, thanks:
“The State also promoted the reduction of the levels of negotiation by activity branch, favoring the companies where the union power was less. Other norms promoted by the State were: a strike hyper-regulatory mechanism that leaded to declare them illegal most of the times, the instability of the collective agreements as to the time of the agreed benefits and the integral revision of the existing ones, and the possibility of receiving just one compensation before an arbitrary dismissal, becoming difficult to reach the reinsertion to the job, among other measures.
What effects did these changes have in the labor organizations? According to the report of Smith, in terms of its relation with the environment, the DGTB was unable to avoid the disaffiliation and reach that new sectors affiliate to company labor unions.”
Rachel
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Can Anyone Check If My English Grammar Is Right? Please And Thank You!?
Posted on November 19, 2011.
Your English is really good. Just take some time to work on phrasing, punctuation, and tenses and you will be golden.
The State also promoted the reduction of the levels of negotiation by activity branch, favoring the companies where the union power was less. Other norms promoted by the State were: a strike OF hyper-regulatory mechanism that LEAD THEM TO declare them illegal most of the times. THE instability of the collective agreements, as to the time of the agreed benefits and the integral revision of the existing ones, and the possibility of receiving just one compensation before an arbitrary dismissal. THIS BECOMES difficult to reach the reinsertion to the job, among other measures.
Hi, a colon has to have a complete sentence before it. so instead of “Other norms promoted by the State were: a strike hyper-regulatory mechanism that leaded…(etc)”
you should say “there were other norms promoted by the state: a strike… (etc)
you did a great job, but there are a lot of run-on sentences. please consider using a semi colon ( ; ) a semi colon MUST have a complete sentence at the beginning and end.
example:
a strike hyper-regulatory mechanism that leaded to declare them illegal most of the times(;) the instability of the collective agreements as to the time of the agreed benefits and the integral revision of the existing one(.) the possibility of receiving just one compensation before an arbitrary dismissal, becoming difficult to reach the reinsertion to the job, among other measures.