I can draw , but my imagination sucks pretty much . ><
Well I thought of something like a girl named Anastasia Crespelle / Lemaitre and she's being captured in the Labyrinth in a church of a high school in Japan . The Labyrinth is based on the third level of the church which is out of bounds to people . Okay maybe not neccessarily out of bounds , but there's been this rumour that there's a ghost on the third level and intruders would be found missing . ( Maybe examples of intruders and real cause of getting missing ? )
But so ! There's this guy named Kaito and he's a freshman in that school . He can be a delinquent or a nice guy , it depends . He ventures into the third level of the church without knowing of the ' curse ' or rumour and sees Anastasia .
He then returns to the third level almost every single day for lunch ( as he has few / no friends ) and eventually gets to know Anastasia . She is a intelligent person , who can ' read ' minds from people's actions and the way they talk .
PROBLEM :
1. Why did Anastasia get captured and sent to the church in Japan ? ( She's some rich aristocrat's daughter by the way ) Is she a pawn or a traded object and affiliated with the school's heads ?
2. Very very important . How should this story continue ? Mystery ( of the school ) ? Or what ? It's going to end by having World War II and she getting reunited with Kaito after the war . How are they going to get separated ?
Best answer gets 10 points . Please help !!
Thank you ! (:
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Posted on December 30, 2011.
waht if this girl is under protection like when someone becomes a witness to maybe a murder and needs to be sent from her country. then even if you wanna make her rich its your choice. I suggest this because if another person could come in and out everyday, why cant she escape? she should be living there because she wants to. it should be some big mafia type organization and very very powerful and dangerous. shes the daughter of a rich guy, so she should have given a lot of protection
she shouldnt know much nihongo too because she isnt japanese right?
maybe you can make her character a little bit traumatized for life.
maybe some of the police from her country found out and sent her to another location(secret). even this kaito couldnt know. the delinquent then tried to be friends with the school geek. concentrate on studies. learnt computers and became a good hacker and hacked the net to find out where did they sent anastasia
but wait a second…. world war 2…. nope the internet hasnt been up at that time.. try and think of something else….
EDIT: heeeyy……. world war 2???? too mainstream why not world war 3 hahahahahaha. ok now u think of a reason how there could be war. maybe you should involve russia and america. easier to make a story.
maybe if she is sent to a country X, then this guy enrolled into the army to be sent there and went to find the girl
Okay here is my idea :
Anastasia had the ability to read minds and the ability to use the element ‘shadows’ during the world war and during those times people who had powers where considered to be witches , so she was locked up and left to die in a church
She was stripped away from her only love ‘Kai’
170 years into the future ‘Kai’ was reincarnated as ‘Kaito’
Kaito was a pretty popular guy and was sent to enter the church as a dare.
Kaito did so , and in doing so he broke a sacred seal and unknowingly gained Anastasias power of wielding shadows
After a frightening meeting , Anastasia explained her past to him and had mentioned that he looked liked someone she knew but she just couldn’t remember that one person
Then she warns him that there will be a tournament to be the next heir to rule the world and since she was dead he had to enter in her place
Since the seal was broken she was allowed to leave the church with him and she constantly annoys him during class because no one can see her but him , they usually don’t get along and for weeks she trains him to use his powers and soon they get to know each other and become good friends _ though his friends at school have a feeling that he is hiding something from them. . .
Kaito’s big brother (give him a sexy name) constantly teases him saying that the reason he is so distracted is that is because he has a new girlfriend which always made Kaito blush. . .
Kaito’s mom is suspicious. . . .
During his training he has flashbacks (memories of Kai’s life).
He manages to pass the first round and made some new friends who also entered the tournament who wield element powers :
Friend 1 (boy) – has the power to wield natural human energy.
Friend 2 (boy) – the ability to wield Metal
Friend 3 (girl) – The ability to wield ice (they call her ice princess as a joke)
Friend 4 (boy) – ability to wield fire (obviously falls in love with friend 3)
Friend 5 (girl) – ability to wield pure light (sunlight)
They all stick together through the tournament and Anastasia teaches them about their elements and secrets behind the tournament
Then the next season comes out : Round two of the tournament
Lol I know its far from your plot but my imaginations goes a bit too far sometimes but I do think my idea might help a bit , I’ve created my own manga’s too and this was suppose to be simalar to my nxt idea but It fits in with your characters more than mine so I don’t need lol
Good luck writing your manga , try and use a small part from my wierd idea ne haha have fun btw a Manga is always a good challenge hahahahaha!
Hi Herbal Tea(your situation are better , I can’t draw and my creative are limit)
I have an idea for your manga even I don’t think my idea sounds good
Problem 1
1)You can make the story like Anastasia’s father is actually an antagonist. He order his servant(or what you can think) to make a capture on her and act he lost her own daughter.He capture her own daughter for some purpose.My idea tell me the purpose is something to do with World War II.The school is an secret base for (what country are you going to put)’s president purpose.Anastasia’s is too clever (like you say)and the president need her idea in the war.(My idea is to make Anastasia a very clever student and the president thought that she can tell future)
Problem 2
This story should continue in mystery.(The country’s myth and Anastasia’s family rival and Kaito’s mystery and more that you can think) They are going separated because Kaito is going back and join the army of his own country to fight where Anastasia’s lives country.And Anastasia try to get them reunited and try to stop the war with her own power.In my opinion your manga should end in tragedy ending like Kaito’s death.
Hope you like my idea. I spent a lot of time to think. 2 points is enough for my answers because I think there will be someone’s idea you might like .
Note: For World War II you should improve your History knowledge in order to not make mistake of that.
(I like Leyla’s fantasy idea!)
(I never thought such romance idea from Abdul Rehman!)
Well it sounds good and I think that when Anastasia should get captured because maybe he doesn’t have a father or a mother she lives with an evil Uncle and Aunt that take cares of them and one day they wanted to kill her because it says in his brother (Anastasia Father) “Will” that all the property and wealth should go to Anastasia and then to his brother and then it will keep saying the next line of people. But the uncle knows that hes next in line. They should also show a flashback where the two brother were fighting about the will and the father maid the decision on putting his daughter next in line to get all the wealth and property. The mother was dead after giving birth. That would lead the Uncle to Capture the daughter and then murder her a couple of weeks later but the hero kaito will save her then thats where there love starts increasing.
After that incident there should show that there going out and dating and show how much the hero loves her and show some problem in there relation ship like a new girl coming in town and she hangs around with Kaito alot and Anastasia belive hes cheating on him and than finding out she just a long childhood friend. So there should be some love and desastor here and there and when there finally 19 WW2 Starts the government took Kaito and then Years has passes Anastasia was sad depressed and when the war was over she thought he was dead and before she was about to kill her self Kaito returns and then they hug and kiss personalty.
Hope I help it took me a couple of minute to make this idea.