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Charles is a good-looking, boyish Briton who represents the perfect type of an English gentleman. Thanks to his dishevelled, black hair, fellow men are rating him as e.g. “cute” or as Matthew “scruffy”. And even though he is being definitely courted by the ladies for his charming way, he is single. In addition he speaks posh – English, what shows that he affiliates to an upper Class, however he swear and says “****” a lot.
Furthermore Charles is, next to his friend Fiona, her brother Tom, Matthew, Gareth and Scarlett, with whom he lives together, very popular. Not only was he invited to every wedding but also acts on one as the best man. Besides his friends, he has a deaf brother, who can only communicate through sign language, wherefore Charles mastered the language. Although Charles has a lot of friends, he drops a brick with his tactlessness and Lack of sensitivity. For example when John breaks/ opens that he is no longer with his girlfriend and Charles blabs about his now-wife’s infidelity. Also the conversation with his ex-girlfriends is hurting some guest feelings, when they make fun of Charles’ Elapsed. Other characteristics of Charles are e.g. unreliability (when he is forgetting to take the rings with him), he is chronically late, carless (for example when he drives backwards on the freeway). Also he can be hypocritically (when Henrietta asks him if Fiona calls her ‘Duckface’ he answers with ‘no’) and he is rude e.g. his jokes. Besides his negative characteristics he has a good humour and takes guests to laugh with his best man speech. Another typical property is his use of the British idiom, as “bloody”, “bugger” and “blimey”.
From the beginning of the film it is clear that Charles found “the right girl” with Carrie and he has falling in love with her. When Charles heard about the engagement of Carrie, he starts for the first time during a conversation with Matthew to questioning, why his previous relationships never worked out and the fear is coming over him, that maybe there is something wrong with him. This hypothesis is reinforced when Henrietta says, that he is turning into a kind of serial monogamist. Furthermore he has hardly no self-confidence, because although Carrie called their coitus “really lovely”, he never takes the initiative to persuade her to be in a relationship with him. While at the beginning of the movie, Charles is still searching for the right one, however at the ending he is chasing by the fear of being forever a bachelor. Thereby he decides to marry Henrietta, though he only needs a person who loves him without exceptions.
Towards the end he changes his perspective on marriage and that it is more important to be with the one you love then to be married at all