Affiliate Marketing Secrets

Hey guys,
I sent my query letter off last night and today I got a reply from the agent saying that my book isn’t really her type.
But! I’m wondering if it has anything to do with my query? A friend of mine showed me how to write one but i got refused by two agents, hmmm…..
I’m going to paste the first chapter of my query and if you guys could give me an honest opinion and some suggestions, that would make my day! This is my first time and I really need some help :/
Dear Mrs ??????,
May I please send you my novel, The Freak in Me, for your consideration? It’s approximately 55,814 words and it’s an occurring story, telling the story of a seventeen year old girl who believed she was kidnapped but thanks to her trauma her mind had blocked everything. One day a striking young man walks into her life and she quickly falls in love but little does she know, her life is going to get a lot worse and later discovers a hidden dark secret she never knew she had. This novel has a mixture of thriller/drama/comedy and it’s aimed it at the young adult market.
Thank you so much for your time! 🙂

I’ve been best friends with this girl since the seventh grade. (We’re seniors in high school now.) And we’ve never fought or had any problems with each other, but now I can’t seem handle being around her.
She’s always been smart and hilarious and beautiful and confident and creative and interesting. She can talk to anyone and have them like her in seconds, including adults. I admit that I kind of envy her a little, but I try not to compare myself to her. It’s just getting harder now that we have classes together. I was really good at English last year (highest class grade, essays used as samples), but we have English together now, and she seems to have taken my place there. We’re also in the same art class together. My confidence in my work has always been pretty low, but now it’s worse because my friend demonstrates a talent far superior to mine. Having her there makes me even less confident in my work because I can’t stop comparing my stuff to hers. It’s terrible.
It’s gotten to the point at which I’ve stopped talking to her as often, and stupid things she says or does make me overreact in anger. I’ll think she’s a know-it-all or an attention-whore or horrible things like that, which I know isn’t my honest opinion, but I guess I’m just jealous.
I’ve explained it to myself as us trying to occupy the same niche. We’re both artistic, good at English, we have very similar humor, we both like to look at the world in the same kind of weird way, we behave pretty similarly. When she’s there, she takes that personaity niche, and I just kind of let her and stay quiet and reserved. But today she was absent, and I felt so much more myself and talkative and outgoing, because that niche was there for me to take. I got to play her role.
I know, it sounds crazy. I have no idea why I find our similarities threatening.
What can I do? How can I stop feeling repressed when she’s around? How can I stop comparing myself to her?
Thanks.

I am on the hunt for people who are making constant returns in Forex. I would like some advice on what course, what EA, what robot (highly sceptical on that one) they are using – basically want some honest feedback to point me in the right direction. I don’t mind studying hard if that is what it takes. I know nothing comes for free but this market has exploded with scammers and affiliates in the current market so getting to the source of decent learning and successful strategies is nigh on impossible. I was at a seminar recently where a forex guru was punting for business; he wanted £3,500 for a weeks course – what put me off was the woman on my left who said her sister had taken the exact course being sold and didn’t learn a thing!! Was the course rubbish, was it beyond the sister’s abilities? Who knows? Who the hell do you trust in this game??? lol. By the way, I am not a newbie, Im familiar with MT4, indicators, price action, pivots, fibs etc – I can almost hear the ‘well you cant be that familiar or you would be making consistent money!! Anyone out there with an unbiased honest opinion on the way to go, who to go with, what to go with? Many thanks.

I’m a 14 year old aspiring artist and this is my first verse of a song called FTW, and I wanted opinions before i post a full song and video, you might get some parts mixed up because i use alot of metaphors but here it is:
1rst v: Im a good kid, that lives in a mad world for a young *****
But its cool cause when i make it everyone gon be on bandwagon, more recognition i cant imagine
But it’s a cold city here, Chi-town has no pity or sympathy here
Cause this life im living, its not the life for me
So Im gonna do whatever that’s right for me
Forget my doubters, Im gonna be what I’d like to be
I been through lots of horrible things you cant frighten me, enlighten me
Dear Lord, have mercy on my enemies
Thank you for the great lyrical talent that you’ve given me
Im tired of the music industry, comparing me to wack wanna be pop stars, man are u kidding me?
Im not your average rapper, i got poetic flow
Every song i make has a message in a song
I need to find my niche somewhere, some place where i belong
But I gotta get out this city, its so lonely and cold.
Forget the world Its just me myself and my team
We dont care what other’s say we just share the same dream
Get rich and famous and buy frivolous things, that we dont need
Like Wiz Were living young-wild-and-free

I’m a 14 year old aspiring artist and this is my first verse of a song called FTW, and I wanted opinions before i post a full song and video, you might get some parts mixed up because i use alot of metaphors but here it is:
1rst v: Im a good kid, that lives in a mad world for a young *****
But its cool cause when i make it everyone gon be on bandwagon, more recognition i cant imagine
But it’s a cold city here, Chi-town has no pity or sympathy here
Cause this life im living, its not the life for me
So Im gonna do whatever that’s right for me
Forget my doubters, Im gonna be what I’d like to be
I been through lots of horrible things you cant frighten me, enlighten me
Dear Lord, have mercy on my enemies
Thank you for the great lyrical talent that you’ve given me
Im tired of the music industry, comparing me to wack wanna be pop stars, man are u kidding me?
Im not your average rapper, i got poetic flow
Every song i make has a message in a song
I need to find my niche somewhere, some place where i belong
But I gotta get out this city, its so lonely and cold.
Forget the world Its just me myself and my team
We dont care what other’s say we just share the same dream
Get rich and famous and buy frivolous things, that we dont need
Like Wiz Were living young-wild-and-free