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I’m writing a story. The basic plot is that a guy (Vince) steals something because he really needs the money. (He has a sick dying mom, 2 daughters, and his wife just died….poor Vince!) However, in the second half of the story you see how it affected the person who got stolen from. My original idea was to have Vince be a mover, on his last day of the job, and steal a small broach because the house was very big and he didn’t think it would be missed. But as it turns out, the house was someone’s great aunt’s house that had just died. That broach was very sentimental to her and she gets very upset. (Sorry guys, I know that summary was a little long.)
Anyway, I asked some people what they thought of it and I got a LOT of different feedback. Some people think it’s unsympathetic to steal something, and think he should steal money instead. OR steal an object, but give it to his daughter as a gift or something so he doesn’t have to pawn it and get caught. Or maybe steal an appliance of some sort that he can directly use (i.e. a bed, blender, make-up, etc). Though it would be hard to make a big deal out of a blender being stolen…
So my question is; Do you think stealing money or an object is more sympathize-able ? (Obviously stealing is wrong – but for story purposes.) What should Vince do with the object? (sell it for money, give it as a gift, or use it?) Any other opinions? Thanks!

I’m writing a story. The basic plot is that a guy (Vince) steals something because he really needs the money. (He has a sick dying mom, 2 daughters, and his wife just died….poor Vince!) However, in the second half of the story you see how it affected the person who got stolen from. My original idea was to have Vince be a mover, on his last day of the job, and steal a small broach because the house was very big and he didn’t think it would be missed. But as it turns out, the house was someone’s great aunt’s house that had just died. That broach was very sentimental to her and she gets very upset. (Sorry guys, I know that summary was a little long.)
Anyway, I asked some people what they thought of it and I got a LOT of different feedback. Some people think it’s unsympathetic to steal something, and think he should steal money instead. OR steal an object, but give it to his daughter as a gift or something so he doesn’t have to pawn it and get caught. Or maybe steal an appliance of some sort that he can directly use (i.e. a bed, blender, make-up, etc). Though it would be hard to make a big deal out of a blender being stolen…
So my question is; Do you think stealing money or an object is more sympathize-able ? (Obviously stealing is wrong – but for story purposes.) What should Vince do with the object? (sell it for money, give it as a gift, or use it?) Any other opinions? Thanks!

When my mom and I went to the Ringling Brothers and Barnum and Bailey circus there were these people handing out cards when you walked in the door. I can’t remember if they affiliated with the circus, but they must have been if they were in the arena is my guess. They instructed us to fill out our name and number, and said they’d call if we won anything. Only my mom filled one out because the rest of us were under 21 (I’m 20 btw).
We got a call yesterday saying my mom had won an all expense paid trip for two to the Bahamas. They said we’d just have to pay the taxes. My mom didn’t believe them because she didn’t remember filling out the paper at the circus since that was about a month or so ago.
The lady that called left her name and number and told us to call back. She said we had a year to claim/take the trip.
No one knows whether to believe if this trip is real or not. What do you think?
Thanks in advance!

I want 2 eat fish & mc in cheese all
Day I only eat the fat free stuff every day ???
I don’t eat fire fish . My mom told me
That it is bad …

Or where you come to a place where you felt like you belonged. I’m 22 and i feel like a chicken with its head cut off. I have a dysfunctional family (mom has bipolar, dad is financially supportive but emotionally vacant and brother has schizophrenia) I still don’t feel like i have found my niche or belong. How long did it take you all out there?

I don’t fit in with my peer group. I cant fit in. I have behavioral issues, and I cant just look n find my own niche and fit into place. So most would see me as childish. I can talk about stuff, but that does run out. So I’m socially awkward. Due to this, I AM happy when I get invited to places and am WELCOMED. But it seems mom gets the ridicule. People wonder y she didn’t raise me right. When people see me, they don’t think any thing’s wrong with me, and when they see these issues, they blame my mom. It’s not her fault. Most in my peer group are wives and moms. I’m not either of these. In our culture(dint know if this is common in american culture), all the women gather in the kitchen, and find something to do(this happens whether there’s a lot or a little to do, or if the women outnumber the tasks to b done). I find that I’m always in the way, so I stay away. I usually mingle with kids, because I figure it’s better than staring into space. But of course, that does raise eyebrows since it’s WEIRD. I’m not trying to b noticed, I just want to fit in somewhere. I figured hanging out with kids(I can relate to them since I grew up in the states), I have more to share. But with adults, I’m more of a nuisance than a help(I’m really slow at stuff too). Even if a party’s at MY house, ladies find a way of ushering me out of MY own kitchen(because I slow them down)…so they take over my task. And if I do yell at them to go away, again, mom gets the ridicule, and I get yelled at for not being lady-like. There’s no winning here(ok, I don’t yell, I just leave, but only once did I yell at an elderly lady who wasn’t my mom n get praised for it).
I don’t ask to be included in social settings, but I guess folks feel bad for me or something, so I get invited, n since I have nothing better to do, I go…it’s fun too. But the above mentioned things are the problems. Plus, the kids do seem to like me, so if I withdraw, they’d wonder y and want me to come. It’s not like I’m best friends with any kids. They know I’m around their parent’s ages. But still, they seem to enjoy my company. No, there’s nothing sick going on, we’re all within eyesight n earshot of the others(which is y mom gets the ridicule for having a childish daughter n not raising her right).
I just want to know how to deal. Thanks.