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Hi,
I am writing an essay and English is not my native language. Please, check my text for mistakes, thanks:
“The State also promoted the reduction of the levels of negotiation by activity branch, favoring the companies where the union power was less. Other norms promoted by the State were: a strike hyper-regulatory mechanism that leaded to declare them illegal most of the times, the instability of the collective agreements as to the time of the agreed benefits and the integral revision of the existing ones, and the possibility of receiving just one compensation before an arbitrary dismissal, becoming difficult to reach the reinsertion to the job, among other measures.
What effects did these changes have in the labor organizations? According to the report of Smith, in terms of its relation with the environment, the DGTB was unable to avoid the disaffiliation and reach that new sectors affiliate to company labor unions.”
Rachel

Hi,
I am writing an essay and English is not my native language. Please, check my text for mistakes, thanks:
“As effect of these measures, the material bases for the possible unionism almost disappeared. This can be observed from at least two axes, both linked with the disappearance of the labor stability wage-earner. On the one hand, a process of expulsion of the workforce linked to the desindustrialization was produced –at least in cities where some type of development was present, such as Sao Paolo-. As a consequence, thousands of workers were obligated to enter to the informality, where the possibilities to affiliate to a labor union are almost inexistent. On the other hand, the other axis was expressed in the expulsion of thousands of workers from the state apparatus, privatized during the first five years of the Silva’s government.”
Rachel

I would like to learn a new language. So far, here is my knowledge:
– Semi-Fluent Spanish (lost a bit, families native language on my fathers side)
-Fluent English
-Basic Polish
-Basic German
-Basic Italian
-Basic French
-Basic Chaldean
I am pretty good with languages and have a niche for linguistics. I’m only in the 7th grade and I am a girl as well. I was thinking of furthering my knowledge and fluency in German or Italian, but I’m not sure of which. I wasn’t satisfied with French, as I ended up giving up as I realized how bad my accent was and could not get it correct. My dad speaks Polish, though he isn’t Polish and I learned the basics and I may take the language further in the future. Chaldean is definitely a more difficult language, but since I live in a Chaldean neighborhood, I picked it up. I can say basic prayers and phrases in Chaldean. So which should I further myself in, German or Italian? Or should I choose another language? (Please give me a suggestion) Also, does this look good for a university application? I want to have a bright future. Thank you for your time(: